well, i did my model photo shoot...

[cosmoepic]

thanks to everyone for helping me get through this stressful shoot

(it was my first)

anyways ive included the link to the 5 shots from the shoot, please check and tell me what you think

i know posting links is "taboo" but i felt for this one it would be easier


Emily and her bowl of ice cream - a set on Flickr

thanks! i think it came out awesome

 

[Bigpopa]

They look alittle on the blown out side.....

 

[Big Mike]

Looks pretty good, well done.

The only problem that jumps out at me is that the ice cream is overexposed.

 

[cosmoepic]

yeah it was tough shooting the ice cream, ive never used lighting or anything

i kinda wanted to blown out look i think it fits the shoot

 

[Bigpopa]

yeah it was tough shooting the ice cream, ive never used lighting or anything

i kinda wanted to blown out look i think it fits the shoot

Oh ok I gotcha now........

 

[LuckySo-n-So]

I think it's good work. I won't deign to criticize as of yet, because I'm "just not there yet." I like the setting and the idea of the shoot. Great setup!

One question though:

Did she REALLY eat all that ice cream???

 

[cosmoepic]

I think it's good work. I won't deign to criticize as of yet, because I'm "just not there yet." I like the setting and the idea of the shoot. Great setup!

One question though:

Did she REALLY eat all that ice cream???

haha no she didnt, i tried to get her to but she wasnt havin it!

thank you for the kind words, it was my first portrait shot and i couldnt be happier and she was super excited about it too

 

[ANDS!]

That corner in the wall kills it for me. Chop it out if you can. Or not if it doesn't bother either of you.

 

[goodoneian]

That corner in the wall kills it for me. Chop it out if you can. Or not if it doesn't bother either of you.

i wouldn't say it kills it for me, but it is a bit distracting. that's my only complaint though, other than that they look good

 

[cosmoepic]

thanks! for some reason i kind of like the corner, but i see what you guys are sayin, ill try to do somethin

 

[tsaraleksi]

Just out of curiosity, what was the goal of the shoot?

 

[jlykins]

I really like the shots. Great idea of using an edgy model, with something as wholesome as icecream. I really like that contrast. I agree that the icecream is a little blown, but like you said, it was your first time using lights. Good job!

 

[Just Jack]

I really like it as well though I was thinking the same thing about that corner

only other thought is that I hope what is written on her chest isn't contrary to the goal of the shoot

 

[leighthal]

I really like it as well though I was thinking the same thing about that corner

only other thought is that I hope what is written on her chest isn't contrary to the goal of the shoot

Cogito ergo sum......... I think therefore I am. I think we all are thinking about some ice cream now. Nice first shoot cosmo.

 

[Just Jack]

yeah I guess as long as it didn't read "I hate ice cream!"