Well, not as good as I wanted, but better than the old ones... (C&C 4)

[misstwinklytoes]

I added the EXIF data for easier suggestions on fixing it.

 

[Corvphotography]

his face doesnt look in focus in any of them to me. my eyes hurt looking at them.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

his face doesnt look in focus in any of them to me. my eyes hurt looking at them.

Oh dear. I didn't mean to cause injuries.
I suggest you don't look at them then.

Thanks for the useful critique tho! :er:

 

[ababysean]

Are you doing much editing to his face? It seems unnatural in most pictures, almost like you are putting a smoothing layer on it.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Yeah as I said earlier He has really bad acne.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Not a smoothing layer tho

 

[ababysean]

oh I didnt see that. I think it draws more attention to his face. Are you just using a healing tool or what?

 

[misstwinklytoes]

yes healing tool in paint shop pro x

 

[misstwinklytoes]

bump?

 

[israel09]

5, 7 and 8 are awesome! love the compositions

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Thank you.