What do you think?

AutumnRebellion

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Can others edit my Photos
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1.)Senior Portrait
Mart_wall_Close.jpg

2)Senior Portrait
1988-10.jpg

3)Mother and Son
May15th011.jpg

4)Senior Portrait
1938_5_7.jpg

5)Maternity
aaron_belly_hug.jpg

6)Family Portrait
riverbw.jpg

7)A more artistic approach to Boudoir
katie_guitar_copy.jpg


What do you think of these? Please critique.
 
I think they are great, but I have an issue with two of them.

No 3, I think its a craking image but the kid seems a little out of focus
No 4, is nothing special (I dont mean the woman in it, just not a fan of that pose)

The others I really like though.
 
I like some of these a lot. I'll comment on just a couple though

#2 - for me this is the pick of the bunch, but you might want to consider a bit of a crop on the right. That should make the subject a little more immediate.

#3 - as Steve has said, the boy is out of focus. The first thing I noticed though was that the woman's hands and elbow are cropped out. Obviously we can't see whether this is an out of camera crop or not, but you may want to back up a fraction or open the zoom out a little if that's what you're using. The shot also lacks a little contrast for me.
 
The lady in nr 7 has some very weird looking nails. And she seems to be levitating. Too bad, cause the rest of the shot is quite good (lighting, pretty looking model, nice idea for a pose etc.).
 

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