Where does the time go?

[captain-spanky]

now.. i think i've gone a bit overboard on the border.. in fact, i don't think i like it.. and i'm starting to think its all leaning a bit to the right but what do you think?

 

[Nikon Fan]

I love the shot and tones, but I agree with you the border is really distracting. The shot stands alone without a border, so maybe just go for a simple plain one if you feel the need to have a border Great shot though!

 

[themonko]

I like it as well, but as you mentioned, I think the border is a bit distracting. I like all the "elements of design" in the photo even though it isn't really a "design" photo.

 

[Jeff Canes]

could use a little grain

 

[mentos_007]

wow... the border is ok but I'm amazed by the amount of details on the fasade of the building!!! lol that's great!

 

[Sharkbait]

now.. i think i've gone a bit overboard on the border..

Yep.

in fact, i don't think i like it.. and i'm starting to think its all leaning a bit to the right

Yep.

but what do you think?

Fantastic photo overall; I think you've already nailed the 2 things holding it back.

 

[Time to Get Moving]

You could try to make the border a little sharper, but tone it down a little bit.
Good shot though!