Would like some crits on a few new photos

beanphotography

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I had the watermarks on these from my store, I didn't have a copy w/o the watermarks on hand so I just posted these. Sorry if they're distracting!

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Very nice. One suggestion for photo 2 - maybe shoot it more from the right, it seems a bit unbalanced with all the stuff on the left side (except the watermark).
 
All good stuff. I'm wanting the glass in #2 to be vertical - is there a reason you didn't straighten it? In #3 I don't think the mostly black rectangle on the left side adds anything to the image. When I held something up to cover most of it, the image seemed stronger to me (as much as I could tell around that obnoxious watermark:lol:). With that change, #1 and #3 both would be very strong images.
 
I like the way the glass looks a lot, but don't like the white dot. Perhaps a different angle?
 
I also like the 3rd one the best. It seems that you have a very nice eye and a vision for compositions!! Very nice set a pictures!
 

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