yes the person is out of focus, and?

[newrmdmike]

serious critiques welcome.

 

[ram018]

I don't see anything that i think could make it better. Of all the photos from that shoot this is deff. the best. I wish you had put this up when you shot it.

 

[New England Moments]

hi Mike... Well by the comment above, it appears you did a series of this type shot/ theme ?? I didn't see any of the others so can only comment on this??

I'm still trying to figure out how the subject got out of focus?? Slow speed and he moved ?? I mean he's only out of focus from hands up ?? Baffled ?

but anyway, not knowing what your theme was , or what you are trying to convey its hard for me to comment.. Its an interesting shot, seems a little strange... I guess you set it up like this...

The shot seems to lack contrast, no real pop to it... but again, maybe thats what you were after, so I better leave this alone...

 

[Rusty_Tripod]

The shor or the idea has potential when the focus issue is resolved. I doubt that you would try to duplicate it.

Rusty Tripod