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Trade ad
I made this shot yesterday for an ad in a trade magazine. I'm sure you know the large, black areas are for ad copy.
As always, I'd love to hear any concerns or critiques.
Thanks!
-Pete
Limitless undying love which shines around me like a million suns;
It calls me on and on...
www.christiephoto.com
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02-06-2009 11:06 AM
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I am Big, I am Mike
Site Moderator
I really like this shot. The rim of light around him really works well.
To me, this shot seems to be about the man and the product comes second. If that's the intent, then that's great.
If, however, the shot is supposed to be more about the product and the inventor is supposed to be secondary, then I think the product should be brighter than it is.
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Originally Posted by
Big Mike
To me, this shot seems to be about the man...
You nailed it. I'm told he's known in the industry.
Thanks, Mike.
-Pete
Limitless undying love which shines around me like a million suns;
It calls me on and on...
www.christiephoto.com
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Ad layout
This is how it was used in the ad.
-Pete
Limitless undying love which shines around me like a million suns;
It calls me on and on...
www.christiephoto.com
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I am Big, I am Mike
Site Moderator
Looks great. A job well done all around.
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yup i agree, that's a good job
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Cool & it's good to know someone's on top of state of the art sludge solidification. You got to get that **** right the first time.
Wanna have some fun? - Critique a critique.
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for trade you need to advertisement. its important.