1st attempt at window lighting [NSFW]

[musicaleCA]

I'm really digging your edit kundalini. Getting rid of the hands and getting some asymmatry really helps the image, methinks. Though I think the framing of her right (er...camera right) nipple could use a little more room.

 

[dizzyg44]

nice! Contrast looks much better too...

The only thing though is her (viewers right) nipple looks weird cut in half. Your version is much nicer but I'd either lose it all together or include it. Wifey says the same

it's fine being up

 

[kundalini]

Hmmm, you may be right. I went back to my edit to look, and while the nipple is in tact (I think, kinda hard to tell on a small jpeg), I did cut off the areola too closely.

 

[dizzyg44]

Kundalini,

thanks for giving me some new ideas. I'll be the first to admit that PP and editing is one of my weakest points.....

 

[Chadfehr]

Too much noise, last edit by kundalini is real good.

 

[Yemme]

Kundalini I like your 2 cents.

I love the formation of the blinds on her back in the first image. Nice shot.