1st Product Attempt

Discussion in 'Commercial/Product photography' started by That One Guy, May 4, 2008.

  1. That One Guy

    That One Guy TPF Noob!

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    I mainly shoot portraits and I am wanting to add product photography to my list of services. This shot was a quick set up to test my L series lens. A plastic seal around the top of the bottle caused the glare and of course if this were for a client I would have removed the seal.

    c&c welcomed and appreciated :)

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  2. That One Guy

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    no comments?
     
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    TamiyaGuy No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Pretty nice. Just a couple of things I would like to add (although I admit they are nit-picky):

    The front of the box seems a bit dark to my liking, maybe add a flash on the front of it or do some PP to make it lighter. Also, I would've used a larger aperture to blur the crumpled tablecloth ;)

    Other than those really minor details, though, that is a really nice picture!
     
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    thanks :) i will keep those suggestions in mind
     
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    Do you have some other photos from this shoot? This one seems to lack creativity.

    Love & Bass
     
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    I think the photo is slightly underexposed and too tightly cropped. And there is a weird shadow coming in on the right side disturbing the shape of the bottle.
     
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    no this shot was just to test my new lens. the wine was a gift and was sitting on the table. i just made a quick arrangement.
     

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