2nd roll

[den9]

wasnt impressed with my first roll, so i tried my second roll. kodak professional 400iso.

17-40mm lens

the sky got washed out

needs straightened out but oh well.

i like this one, but the car in the background with the reverse lights is distracting.

i love wide angle!

let me know what you guys think, i had them developed at a drug store.

 

[William Petruzzo]

You know, I like the second one best. I think the slightly crooked angle actually adds some charm to the picture. I didn't even notice the car in the background until you pointed it out. What bothers me more is that your subject is slightly underexposed while the stone wall is just about right. There isn't much you can do about that without throwing more light on her. Since the sun is coming from the right, a reflector to the left would do the trick.