4 photos for you to Critique.

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  1. Sundae

    Sundae TPF Noob!

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    Here are 2 photo's for you to critique. I am 14 years old currently, and I hope to become a great photographer one day. :D

    Do you have any critique for me on these photos? I would love to get better.

    Model: Canon Powershot A520.

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    And 2 of my doll:

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    Go ahead, critique it to your hearts content.
     
  2. ashfordphoto

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    I've gotta ask, is that sasquatch in 1? :hail:
     
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    Yeah I don't know what that is in the first image but it's an awesome photo. The fact that you don't see the rest of the animal but just its hand (assuming that IS an animal) is awesome. Good composition, colors, etc.

    The other 3 aren't bad either but for me the first one really stands out. Nice job.
     
  4. Sundae

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    haha! No, it is a little monkeys hand.. It was so cute, about 1 foot tall. I took it through the cage at the zoo.:wink: !
     
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    the last 2 are blown out.
     
  6. Sundae

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    I'm sorry but
    What does that mean? o.o
     
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    I really like these photos. They have a unique style to them!
     
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    That means that there is no detail in the highlights.. In simplest terms, the shutter was open too long, and let in too much light, which makes the lightest parts of the image white. You don't want to do that, because instead of seeing detail in the image, all you see is the color of the paper.

    I really like the concept of the last two, though. It looks a bit like a faux Suicide Girl.

    Same as everyone else, number one is a standout! I thought it looked like a sasquatch or troll hand. But be careful not to get too close to simians in cages, as they have been known to mutilate people.
     
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    More likely the flash was direct and too powerful.
     
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    I like No1. The composition of 2 is too central. Read about "The Rule Of Thirds". No 1 exhibits this.
     
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    #1 is awesome! i love that the fingers are off centered and that i can't see the rest of the animal. the rest don't jump out at me.
     
  12. Garbz

    Garbz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    14 years old and you already take pictures better than I do! You have a rare talent. The pictures of your doll are blown out as has already been mentioned. However I like the affect. If they were not blown they would look somewhat dull.
     

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