A story of the little dog who could....( a series)

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  1. forgottenskies

    forgottenskies TPF Noob!

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    It was a nice summer day, and Precious pit bull headed off to the pool...
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    Her favorite ball, oops! fell into the pool!
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    Whatever was she to do now?! she ran to me in desperation...
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    She begged...[​IMG]
    even cried...
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    I would not help her, she needed to grow, to learn... so she stood by the pool, thinking long and hard, what was she to do?[​IMG]
    The only boat was swamped by crocs...[​IMG]
    Her only choice was to go in. she mustered up all her courage...and off she went into the water.[​IMG]
    Upon reaching her target she snatched it and returned...[​IMG]
    Ahhh sweet victory![​IMG]
     
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    Some great angles (especially like the one standing on her back paws), captured water movement (first one in the water particularly), and overall lighting and series composition. Very nicely done.
     
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    I love it! This is an excellent use of angles and emotion to create a great story. Its unique and exciting, and I love dogs too so it tugs at the heart strings. :thumbup:
     
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    this is my first attempt at a series...so please let me know what things i should change, and like you guys abovem what I did right. I quite enjoyed this...I want to know how to do a good job. thanks you all!
     
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    Meysha still being picky Vicky

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    Ahhh that's hilarious! Looks like you two had a fun day! I love the one where she's standing there looking and thinking hard... it fits the series so well! Great angles and great story too! Made me laugh!! :lol:
     
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    Love this series, she looks like a wonderful dog. My favorite is the 4th where she's looking up at you. Really great job!
     
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    What I don't like about these pictures is that, give me a website to critique and I can go on for days (even in my own) of things that should be done different but in your series here, as with many photos (which is why I don't post much in the critique forum), I see photos as something the "artist" designed and not really to be judgemental. Every photo has a story behind it and you've done that very well with these featured above. In my opinion, a bad photo to one person may be an excellent photo to another. Myself, there are a few friends in particular that I rarely see and to have a blurry photo vs no photo.... well... ok, I'll refrain. ;)
     
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    ::BUMP:: :)
     

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