A Sunset and a wild goose for C&C

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  1. Jaszek

    Jaszek No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    And for my 1000th post I give you 2 sunsets and a wild goose in the dirty East River of NYC. It just really want to make you live here in the Polluted NYC :D
    1. Fixed the exposure on the sky in LR
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  2. Jaszek

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    You seem like you really want someone to say something, so here goes. :lol:

    Love the clouds in #1. That's the kind of sunset we all hope for every night. It does seem a touch crooked, but easily fixed.

    #2 doesn't do much for me. I'd like to see some detail in those dark buildings, but I realize the lights weren't probably on yet. I think I would have cropped this in much tighter around the bright spot, either with a telephoto lens or in post-processing.

    #3 - I like the composition here. Would be nice to have some more light on the goose, but the reflections in the water are nice. Wouldn't know it's polluted water unless you told me. Maybe some fill flash would have brightened up the goose and not hurt the colors in the water.
     
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    Leave a little more room for the subject to be "moving" into. In this case (#3), more room at the bottom right.
     

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