A Trip To The Park (C&C, my first landscape shoot!!)

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  1. kalni

    kalni TPF Noob!

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    I hope they are not too many to absorb at one go :)
     
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    Far from an expert, but #2 rocks.
     
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    HALT! PUT YOUR HANDS UP, DROP THE MOUSE, AND STEP AWAY FROM THE PHOTOSHOP!

    Compositionally awesome, but dear God the processing...
     
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    I like #2 and #5. I think #2 would be better if there was a little less PP. What did the original look like?
     
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    The only PP I did in 2 was to blue up the sky a bit cause it looked overblown.
    And 5 was turned to sepia, 6 might look photoshopped but believe me it is SooC, in fact its quite overexposed maybe I should do something about it in PS :)

    Anyway am glad you think the compositions are good since this is my first try.

    Anyone else please ??? I hoped to get a few C&C from the veterans as well :(
     
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    decent composition but I agree that you need to work on the post processing techniques. Also, what is laying in the grass in #3? Is that a dead body!? or a bum sleeping?
     
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    #2 and #5 are my favorite, but all show thought and are well executed.

    Maybe throw some non-PP up sometimes, the skies in 1 and 2 really look manufactured.

    Great work!
     

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