Attempt at guiding your eye

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  1. Synergy

    Synergy TPF Noob!

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    Recently, I visited Le Mont-Saint-Michel in France and amongst other I took this pic half way up. I wanted to draw your eye to the horizon by using the hut to grab your attention, which then hopefully would lead you eye towards the sandbank/river that stretches out towards the horizon. I really tried to compose this shot to guide your eye in that manner so would appreciate your thoughts on how succesfull I’ve been.

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    Synergy

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  2. canonrebel

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    It works.
     
  3. Camper Dave

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    yep, it works!

    nice pic :D
     
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    it works at drawing the eye but once draw there is nothing of interest on the horizon.
     
  5. ShutterBug4_4

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    It definitely works. I would love to see any other Mont-St-Michel photos you took on your trip! Nice work! 8)
     

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