Beautiful Summer Rays

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  1. NoelNTexas

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  2. ANDS!

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    I dont know if I like it or love it.
     
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    First off, what type of portrait is this? Senior? I like the lighting but I would have had her pick up her face a bit and brought the space on the top down a bit. I think it's vertically off balance. I love how the print of the dress pops! Good shot!
     
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    Fantastic. The vertically off balance makes it even better. If it were straight she may appear to be slouching IMO. I agree with the space on the top but that's nothing a 4x5 crop couldn't fix to taste. Maybe a quick photoshop for whatever that is on the right. But utterly stunning!
     
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    More of her shots

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    Look Great, nice job!
     
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    The window shot is awesome!! Beautiful control of light. I like the shot in the red top by the brick wall as well. Nice DOF. Good work.
     
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    Spot on mate. Echo Garbz off-tilt comment - adds character to shot.

    Are these for Senior Portraits or something?
     
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    these are all cool. !! I am more drawn to #2 visually then the soft one.
    Just wish I could see all of her in #2 , but good shots !!! Also the soft one with the rays looks pretty cool, interesting colors and saturation make it a fun pic
     
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    These are absolutely gorgeous! Something about the light coming through the window on her in #1 works so well. Not sure I would agree with the tilt, but everything else about the photo is just spectacular. Its so different, and thats what makes it great.

    As for the rest, I really like the color and focus. Skin tone is maybe a little on the reddish side, but not bad.

    Lovely model! Overall, very well done.
     
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    Yes I'd agree with the oversaturated reds. Nice images though.
     
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    I like them all... except the last oen you posted. She is so beautiful!
     

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