C&C for a couple shots from Halloween

[altitude604]

Picked out a couple of my favourite shots from Halloween Karaoke at the Pub last night.

#1 My Friend in her Banana costume pretending to eat herself. hah

#2 The Back Bar... saw the light coming through the bottles and thought it looked cool.

#3 Just messing around with the Neon light.

(I know, I know, subject is too centered. Trying hard to break that habit... hehe)

 

[tom123]

Thanks for posting.
I like the first and the last. The first has a good emotion. Last one actually works well when centered, don't worry you don't always have to follow the thirds rule. Good luck!

 

[Rudha]

love the expression in #1 ..it's like 'don't make me eat myself '.....

#2 ...idk it doesn't work for me...i think there is too much going on in the image try zooming in so that u concentrate on individual bottle or u can change ur angle so that shelves look horizontal....may be.

#3 again a closer crop ...i think there is some dead space on all sides but otherwise good

i like the fact that u used some lighting other than flash....good job!
keep shooting.
~cheers!

 

[redtippmann]

Nothing really stands out. Just snapshots really, just try to take time to compose and make the best out of what you have to work with. And out of
thoes I think 2 is the best