C&C from Tenn. trip please

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  1. hawkskater500

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    Any C&C is welcome, newbie here..

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    #1 I'd personally like to see more of the gun in focus...but that's just me. It's also a little dark - could use some fill.

    #2 I think it's nice. The light pole is leaning though, due to the angle of the shot.

    #3 doesn't interest me

    Keep shooting.
     
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    #1. nice shot, I like the concept. However, it doesn't make sense to me to focus in the middle of the gun. I'd have focussed on either the guy (about were his eyes are) or the very end of the gun. Or just increased the sharp area.

    #2. nice, but average. And yes, the pole is leaning... (It's pretty hard to get that right IMO.)

    #3. I can't really see anything interesting in this shot, also looks a tad unclear to me. Like the shadow of the bush though.
     
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    #1 I was trying to get the front sight of the gun focused


    #2 Just thought the sky was a cool color

    #3 Again thought the sky turned out a cool color..

    You will have to excuse me, I am new to this whole long exposure thing, and seeing the different colors it produces. haha
     

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