C&C My shot at a 'Coronita' Ad

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  1. Munky

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    Taken @ Playa Santa (Holy Beach) in Guanica Puerto Rico!

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    loose the people and the cheap seats.
     
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    Estoy de acuerdo con Tulsa ;)


    I agree with Tulsa.
     
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    Ohh I'm Sorry I Forgot to Bring My TIFFANY Chairs.....duh..this was spur of the moment i saw it resembling a TV Commercial i Took My Beer Placed it and took the Picture...
    this aint a forged replica of an ad; is just really how you will see people on the beach! which happend to look like the Ad...
     
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    reznap No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The biggest thing that takes away from it are the people right behind the bottle. I love the boats in the back, almost wish the DOF was deeper so they could be seen more clearly. It's a fun shot though and it looks pretty good
     
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    Bottle is too far to the left - gap between bottle and the sitting people is too big.

    You should have gone closer to get the bottle a bit bigger.

    Too much PP. The sea doesn't look too realistic!

    Clone out all over people/objects to make it more appealing.

    Not a bad shot considering the circumstances.
     
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    This shot is horrible, and makes my blood boil. Not because of the DOF, or the people, or the chairs..... WHERE"S THE LIME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
     
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    cute pic....too bad the chairs cheapen the shot. but i like how crisp and focused u got the bottle. and u did say to C&C.
     
  9. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    We can see that.

    Why bother with C&C on a "spur of the moment" effort!
     
  10. mrpink

    mrpink No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    ohh, your one of those people.:er::er::er:


    [insert worthless C&C here].... saving breath and moving on.





    p!nK
     
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    agreed the people are a distraction. good capture overall
     
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    Hey, you asked for C&C, if you cant take my opinion, don't ask!

    Next time try putting some effort into your shots, rather than being a spur of the moment shot, and maybe your results will be better!
     

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