Composition CnC

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  1. FreeStyLe

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    practicing composition to improve, please cnc the composition in the following photos

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    i think the lighting is a bit off ... and the second picture looks a bit soft.
    good try though =)
     
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    i softened the second picture myself using difuse glow in PP. can you elaborate on how the lighting should be? thank you.
     
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    My eyes want more contrast in that second photo, soft focus or not.

    I like the first one a lot more, though it could use a bit more contrast as well (just a personal preference there).
     
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    I think they are trying to say that they want more contrast between the white flower and the background. The flower is a little too soft. It needs to "pop" more. But composition wise. I like it :)
     

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