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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by nerdyD, Jan 6, 2008.

  1. nerdyD

    nerdyD TPF Noob!

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    I recently did a portrait shoot with a friend of mine. Criticism welcome.

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  2. Lorielle99

    Lorielle99 TPF Noob!

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    the only one i dont like is 2
     
  3. bhop

    bhop No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I agree with Lorielle99. The gun is cut off, his hat is cut off. You are kinda teased with part of his face. I think if at leats one eye was in the shot, it could add something to it.

    The rest though are cool. I like the first the best although his shoe could be cropped out. I think the one where he's "shooting" is nice too, but it looks like the focus is on his knee.
     
  4. KristinaS

    KristinaS TPF Noob!

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    I like 3 and 4 best.
     

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