Critique this photo please!

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Ramy, May 7, 2007.

  1. Ramy

    Ramy TPF Noob!

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    Too much going on fighting for my attention and the subject isn't particularly interesting. Also too much burnt out highlights catch the eye.

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    some suggestions:

    - try simplifying the number shapes - either all screws or all stars
    - perhaps a wider subject, so there is a gradual fade out of focus - not subject/background
    - throw some more dust on the picture! - its the most interesting detail
    - can you catch a useful reflection in the stars?
     

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