Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Ramy, May 7, 2007.
Too much going on fighting for my attention and the subject isn't particularly interesting. Also too much burnt out highlights catch the eye.
- try simplifying the number shapes - either all screws or all stars
- perhaps a wider subject, so there is a gradual fade out of focus - not subject/background
- throw some more dust on the picture! - its the most interesting detail
- can you catch a useful reflection in the stars?
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