Crybaby - Photo+Digital Art

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by MommyOf4Boys, May 11, 2006.

  1. MommyOf4Boys

    MommyOf4Boys TPF Noob!

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    I was wondering if this looks stupid. I was playing around trying to come up with some photos to enter into a photo/digital art contest. Is there something I should change, etc?

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    Ok, I think this should look a little bit better after reading yall's remarks. I made the tears along the bottom eye lid come away from the white of they eye more to make it look more like tears along the bottom lid rather than IN the eye lol. I also brightened up the eye a bit...tell me if this is looking better?? Remember, it is suppose to have some dimension, because it is a digital art photo...
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  2. MommyOf4Boys

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    dang..no help here?? LOL
     
  3. Hoppy

    Hoppy No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I love the idea but the water effect along the lower eye lid looks a little 2 dimensional to me, but I am no good with computors so cannot suggest a way to improve/change it sorry.
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    I agree with Hoppy. Also, I think the iris could be more vibrant. Not BAM IN YOUR FACE BLAM BOOM BIM blue, but a little more blue :)
     
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    i think its a pretty cool shot, cool idea
     
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    Hi.. I agree with both above, the tears sitting in the eye don't look quite right to me... and maybe a lighter shade of blue around the pupil could make it stand out more? xxx Cool idea x
     
  7. MommyOf4Boys

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    so maybe removing some of the tears away from the white of the eye and making the blue in the eye a little more vibrant?
     
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    Yep! Thats great... love the colour of the iris...almost violet! Gorgeous xx
     

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