Did this for my wife

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  1. jlykins

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    I went to the park the other day and did some shots of the kids. I put together a little 8X10 for the wife. So what do you guys think?

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    I like the concept, but for me it seems like there's a whole lot happening in the picture. My eyes didn't know where to go. But like I said, I think the concept is pretty cool.
     
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    Too much PP im my opinion- there's a ton going on and the kids look like they're in the water...
     
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    they are very attractive children, why not let them stand on that and not introduce all that other stuff which really detracts from them.
     
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    the kids seem a bit soft and i think it seems a bit jumbled. to me it;s unclear why these things are comped like this.
     
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    In my humble noob opinion it dose not work for me. At first it looks like 2 kinds trapped in a flood and I know that sounds like a joke but that's what I really thought.. I would forget about the bird and work with just the kids and go from there.
     
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    I'm certain your wife will love to get photos of your adorable children but they almost don't seem to be the subject of this image. I think it's a little too busy. I feel it would be a much better image without all of the extras. A mother's children always make her heart smile.
     

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