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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Pinus strobus, May 22, 2008.

  1. Pinus strobus

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    I think that this picture has potential, but I don't understand why it feels.... bland to me. Maybe something in the conversion? I dunno.... it feels like something is lacking.
     
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    I like the repetition of the shapes...the composition seems fine, but it feels rather flat.

    perhaps just a little more contrast to make the flowers in the foreground stand out a bit??

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    I'd say that looks better. Mebbe a little crop on the right and top? (More on the right).
     
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    That definatly helps the flowers in the foreground to stand out more. I like that edit. Thanks for your help!
     
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    I think it looks good! but I think the whites need to be a little whiter
     

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