Doorway

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  1. Pkboi24

    Pkboi24 TPF Noob!

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    Another shot I took on top of the garage:

    https://webspace.utexas.edu/pkboi24/pictures/doorway.jpg?uniq=-sgzmbj

    EDIT: I just wanted an overall critique. Just got started on the hobby. Any constructive criticism would be helpful. I shot this in full auto with a Canon EOS Rebel K2. Also, I know the limit is 150kb, but does count if post a link instead of the picture?
     
  2. Hertz van Rental

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    Thank you for the edit.
    It is preferable to post the picture if you can as a lot of people can't be bothered to open a link. If they don't see a picture they tend to move on.

    I'm afraid I can't get the picture to open up - it only functions as a link.
    The answer may be for you to use a free image host like 'fotopic'.
     
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    I like the tone of the picture. The starkness of the concrete is cool

    The exit sign feels out of place though, and that bothers me because I have a feeling that was supposed to be a major element of the picture.

    Horizon feels a bit tilted as well.

    Nice eye, and nice pic with a little bit of tweaking.
     

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