Egg Hunt (2 pics) Your thoughts please

[bradleypics]

Some shots from the egg hunt today, any thoughts would be appreciated.

Thanks.

#1 - An elmo egg!

#2

 

[m.stevenson]

I got to say 2 is my favorite. nice composition and its kind of funny that she is holding a duck with a duck shirt on.

 

[bradleypics]

I got to say 2 is my favorite. nice composition and its kind of funny that she is holding a duck with a duck shirt on.

Thanks, I wasn't sure if it looked funny with her face being cut off right above the mouth.

 

[white]

#2 is wonderful.

 

[m.stevenson]

I got to say 2 is my favorite. nice composition and its kind of funny that she is holding a duck with a duck shirt on.

Thanks, I wasn't sure if it looked funny with her face being cut off right above the mouth.

I think that if you had her face in it people would see that before they see what she has in her hands

 

[LaFoto]

I think you might want to crop No. 2 square and leave out all of her face and neck and neckline of the t-shirt, and ONLY focus on her hands, the duck, and the duck on the t-shirt. Even more so, than you did here, as her mouth and neck DO look distracting to me - still do, although the rest of her face cannot be seen.