Egg Hunt (2 pics) Your thoughts please

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  1. bradleypics

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    Some shots from the egg hunt today, any thoughts would be appreciated.

    Thanks.

    #1 - An elmo egg!

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    #2

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    I got to say 2 is my favorite. nice composition and its kind of funny that she is holding a duck with a duck shirt on.
     
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    Thanks, I wasn't sure if it looked funny with her face being cut off right above the mouth.
     
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    #2 is wonderful.
     
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    I think that if you had her face in it people would see that before they see what she has in her hands
     
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    I think you might want to crop No. 2 square and leave out all of her face and neck and neckline of the t-shirt, and ONLY focus on her hands, the duck, and the duck on the t-shirt. Even more so, than you did here, as her mouth and neck DO look distracting to me - still do, although the rest of her face cannot be seen.
     

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