Engaged couple portrait. C&C Please

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  1. burnws6

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    It's good, but to me there's something about the guy's face that looks a little off. Could be his smile, could be HIS right eye with the lighting ... not really sure. I would also clone out the stray hair over the woman's left breast.
     
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    Ahh, thanks lol. Didn't even notice that hair.
     
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    Maybe a little sharpening? :)
     
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    Is that sarcasm lol? Because it's tack sharp :lol:
     
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    very pretty- could just be my monitor, but I am seeing an orangish/red sheen in the highlight areas on their foreheads? I would clone out the stray hair on her, and maybe do a slight bit of healing on his complexion? Also the hot spot on the noses if you can smooth them out might be nice.
     
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    Good catch on those hot spots. I'll post a revised version later on.

    Here's another one from that day:

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