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  1. rebecca

    rebecca TPF Noob!

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    Her first photo session my first session with a newborn.

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    Chase I am now benign! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Very nice, exposure looks great and I like the expression of the child. This is getting REALLY nitpicky, but the bracelent on the right bothers me a little. It steals some of my attention away from the main subject...but again, that is being REALLY picky.

    Very nice shot!
     
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    I agree with that but the mother insisted that it be on, I did however talk her out of taking off her rings.
     
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    Beautiful!!! I am sure I have never seen a mother & daughter pose like that. The hand and arm reaching into space is a brilliant idea. The chid; so comfortably resting there shows an intimate bond.

    The bracelet is not "optimal", but I do not mind it. I think I would have minded rings. Good job on that point. Maybe open the skin tones.
     
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    What a striking photo! Wonderful creativity, you often see that with the father's hands, but not the mother. I'm sure you have a very happy client. Great lighting, too!
     
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    Great shot!
     
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    That photo is fantastic. OMG that baby is sooooo tiny!
     
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    Very beautiful shot ... I'm sure the mother is incredibly happy! ... I would be :D
     

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