Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Jonathan Schertzer, Feb 24, 2010.
Please, any and all critque is greatly appreaciated
First photo looks like they are hiding away!
In the third photo, there seem to be some weird shade on the face and hand portion. Too much dodging/burning?
I just don't think you've captured the right moment.
1)too much of him not enough of her and you're too far away
2) not really a V-day moment as a portrait that could use slight fill flash
3)what was mentioned about her left hand, and his right needs to do something besides poking her gut. If the backround was a must then I would have put him on the right straight backed and her angled like she his...basically flip flopping them. Personal prefference I guess....or tightened up the frame and turned the camera clockwise 20-30 degrees...his heads' a little overexposed as well.
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