Girls and Light

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by lwdeadtime, Apr 18, 2007.

  1. lwdeadtime

    lwdeadtime TPF Noob!

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    [​IMG] C&C please!
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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Your lighting makes the blue of the eyes in Photo 1 stand out quite nicely, but I am absolutely no fan of the shadow here, makes her face look all plump and puffy. And the sharp shadow of her nose is not really that nice, either, I think.

    The second photo is better, but I feel there is way too little detail in the shadow part, which is part of your model, while the background gets all the light. It feels like a little additional light to your left would have helped.

    Just the [​IMG] of someone who is the total amateur in portrait photography.
    Hey, and I feel I better move these to People and Pets. That's where the non-professional portrait photogs on here meet.

    Oh, and by the way:

    Welcome to ThePhotoForum :D
     

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