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Discussion in 'Nature & Wildlife' started by Monica Fermin, Jul 30, 2008.

  1. Monica Fermin

    Monica Fermin TPF Noob!

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    please critique!

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  2. Monica Fermin

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    :( that bad huh?
     
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    hehe, Nah, you just have to give it 24 to 48 hours.

    I like it. It's a good shot.

    My critique would be to give it a smaller aperture (bigger number) so that more of the petals are in the DOF range. Either that or focus on the inner-bottom of the flower if you want the petal tips DOF blurred like that. I would also run it through two levels of sharpening to bring out those wonderful flower/plant vein textures.

    Excellent framing, good exposure, interesting subject.

    Keep them coming! And thanks for sharing!
     

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