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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by darin3200, Apr 1, 2006.

  1. darin3200

    darin3200 TPF Noob!

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    Im not sure if I like the sky effect or not. Its kind of newspapery. It lacks vividness in my opinion. (please excuse my fake words)
     
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    Even though I'm sure that the sky was monochromatic like that when shot, it feels almost out of place with the color of the lower half. I would try converting it to black and white and see how that works.
     
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    I wouldn't change a thing. Whether the sky truly was mono or not, it's perfect.

    The ground is the only thing with color -"life"- in it, as that life is sucked from it and all surrounding foliage (notice the barren tree) and expelled into the sky in the form of monochrome, all-encompassing grey.

    The grain in the image, more visible in the sky, adds to the uncomprimising yet bleak depiction of this scene. This is an image that's natural, political, artistic and silent all at once.

    Magnificent... excellent work!
     

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