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    I like the first one better. The lines/angles make the picture for me
     
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    #1 your leading lines take the viewer immediately to the top left corner and right out of the image.

    #2 feels like 2 different photos on a single canvas.
     
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    Really? I can see that. Personally, I first see the area where the left line and the clouds have the most contrast, and then my eye floats around in the clouds. There is a lot more of the building to be shown; I cropped pretty aggressively. So maybe I'll make another one tonight or tomorrow that is closer to how the negative looks.

    I just wish I could have eliminated that cloud reflection. I had a polarizer on, but I guess shooting the building from that angle made it pretty useless.

    Thanks for the feedback!
     

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