more BW shots... C&C please!

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  1. blindfoldinosaur

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    #1- I don't normally like power line photos but this one works

    #2 what's in focus?

    #3- get close

    #4 it's flat. your ground and sky just blend together

    #5- this is better. you have a foreground object that stands out. it's still flat in general but it's better.

    the latter two would probably be better as color or as even more contrasty
     
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    +1 on #1

    I'm not sure the tilt on #3 does anything to help it. In addition to cropping, darkening the mid-tones might make it more interesting.
     
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    I don't really think these need to be in black and white. You're also putting halos on 'em by whatever post-processing you're doing. : (
     

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