Motocross Rider

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by portrait tips, Sep 2, 2010.

  1. portrait tips

    portrait tips TPF Noob!

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    Hi this is my first post, so I hope I've got right.
    Image was taken with a Canon 5D & 24mm F1.4L lens
    Lumydine Portable Flash & 30" soft box
    If you would like more technical info visit my blog.
    Thank you for viewing
    Wayne

    http://www.portraittipsandtechniques.com

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    MOTOCROSS 1 selenium by radfordphoto, on Flickr


     
  2. Rekd

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    Nice concept. Focus looks a bit soft.
     
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    Thanks Rekd, the 30x20 image in my gallery is sharp. But I agree it looks a bit soft on the screen and I think it looks a little too dark also. I've resized it again, and lightened it also. May be more my fault the way I resized it. Anyway here's another one.

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    MOTOCROSS 1 by radfordphoto, on Flickr
     
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    Awesome photo. I love it! Could have used some rim lighting on the right (his right) but nicely done!
     
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    this is pretty cool, could be a little more focused. Cant see the second image
     
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    It could use a bit more focus like others have said. Another thing is that the bike is older(pre 05) and mostly stock. it makes the focal point, being the bike, boring. I would try to get some graphics and polish up the crank case. other than that great shot!
     
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    Great photo!
     
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    very nice photo......
     

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