My first Black and white attemp. C&C please

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  1. The Mullet

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    hey guys,

    Im looking for some C&C on this photo. thanks

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    The texture and light are great; I'm not a big fan of having the lamppost right in the middle, though; it's nice that you included it, but it might be better a little off to the side. Other than that, great shot!
     
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    I like it! I like the subject...tones and texture. Nice work!

    ...My only complaint would be that the lamp post is sitting too tight in the photo. What I mean is...It almost looks like it's holding the photo up!
     
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    Yea i agree with about the lampost being centered. But if it wasnt there would be some unwanted viewing of the street. Even with cropping i still wouldnt have got it that way i wanted. thanks for the positive feedback. And if i took even 1 step back i would have had bright sun come right over the top of the building :(
     
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    I like the overall picture. The white spot on the top left is a bit distracting, perhaps change your angle a bit to get only the building and the light post. You B&W is nice. Very good contrast and shadows.
     

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