My First Newspaper Assignment!!!!!

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  1. DeepSpring

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    So these are pictures from the first assignment I was given. I don't know exactly what the articles are about so I just took as many as I could and they can choose the pictures that fit best. Since the paper is in B&W so are these.

    my assignments were

    1. Cheesepuffs (these cheeto like snacks the school sells)
    2. Lockers
    3. Stressed student pulling hair
    4. Football players


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    sorry put this one twice

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    So how did I do?
     
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    I love #1 and 5. Hahhahah...looks like your school causes headaches!! :)
     
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    they gave me a note saying kid pulling hair (stressed) and no more information, so i tried to get as many veriations of the shot as possible hoping I get something that matches the article lol

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    i think #4 is a very nice picture. as for the student, it just depends, in my opinon, whether or not the student is stressed in general, or from schoolwork. if schoolwork, make sure and use one with a book involved or something. otherwise, if general stress, i think #10 is nice.
     
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    #3 and #10 do it for me...keep it up, tyke
     
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    Good stuff, #3 is nice
     
  7. DeepSpring

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    Thanks guys. The weird thing is, I shot on color film and the only thing I did to #3 was adjust the contrast and brightness a hair. My print came out like. Even tho you cant see it right at the end of the lockers was an open door to the outside so I'm thinking that so much light was hitting the lens my cameras meter told me to expose it to the ligh of the door and not the lockers, but anyways this "mistake" tho I wouldn't really call it that turened out to be one of my favorite pictures
     
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    I really liked number 10, DeepSpring. I liked it so much, I just nominated it for POTM. You captured a good moment there. That photo conveys a lot of emotion, even without a face.
     
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    Thank you :D:D. and everyone else for their replies too I appreciate all you feedback
     
  10. I am not a fan of selective coloring, but for the Cheesy Poofs it might be fun to try.
     
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    good job. you did well :)
     
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    #1 IMO the DOF is a little to shallow, think the bag should be if focus too

    IMO #10 works the best for stress, also #8 would be good, but #S 5, 6 & 7 seem a little too animate IMO, what I like about #10 is that it is faceless and could be most any guy.
     

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