MY first paying job [:

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Igor Lubenski, Dec 12, 2007.

  1. Igor Lubenski

    Igor Lubenski TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 16, 2007
    Messages:
    17
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    a few weeks ago some i saw a post here http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=100820

    and i wrote what I thought about his work...some of you told me that i mean:lol:
    but seriusly,when you take money for your work so fo it right,or don't take money....

    to be fair here's mine first paying job,whit a girl who wanted some pictures and paid me 30$ ( 120 shekels).i shot her twise.the second time
    i had only about an hout to shoot her....i asked her to come in the morning but she came in noon....and with the israely sun,it's hard:meh:
    anyway here's a few shots from this shoot....
    [​IMG]


    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]
     
  2. cameramike

    cameramike TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Sep 4, 2007
    Messages:
    875
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    NJ
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    they are good shots, only big improvement would have been if you had focused on her eyes, they don't really pop out at all and that is normally a big focal point for most portraits. number 2 and 3 are my favorite, number one the flowers in her hand are a bit cut off
     
  3. Igor Lubenski

    Igor Lubenski TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 16, 2007
    Messages:
    17
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    actually in the portraits i did focus on the eyes...in the original and the print it looks better ]=
    but in the body shots you right....it was kind of hard...i missed the eyes and the focus was on necklacse,hair etc' ...
     
  4. [JR]

    [JR] TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2007
    Messages:
    281
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Campbellton, NB, Canada
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Number 1 made me go wow, could use a better crop though.
     
  5. Igor Lubenski

    Igor Lubenski TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 16, 2007
    Messages:
    17
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    thank's :)
     

Share This Page