My Nikon d5000 pics(new to slr cameras)

[Hybrid Designz]

Hello first of all. My name is Matt and I'm from Oklahoma. This is my first dslr camera and i need some C&C and what ever else you think i need, lol

Please have a look...

the second pic was my first picture i took with my new d5000.
I linked these images off my facebook so i hope they arent too bad quality

 

[zeto88]

If only the horizon was straight in the last one...

 

[Hybrid Designz]

I edited it in photoshop and made it straight or straighter that is...lol i will post a pic of the edited one in a sec.

Also...all these photos are not edited. These were just converted from raw format

C&C anyone?

 

[Hybrid Designz]

its a lil better horizon line...

 

[zeto88]

Make it completely straight, then just fix up the corners with the clone stamp tool.
Noone would know the difference. ;D

 

[Hybrid Designz]

What about the other pics?

 

[zeto88]

Personally, I think the focus on the very far left part of the light been thing ( not too sure what is it ) would have been much more effective.
Also, the Nikon lens cap, the background is very distracting. I know it's supoosed to be a 'messy desk' sort of situation, but I was trying to work out the brand of pen for ages! Ahahaha.
The picture of the painting is wonderful!
Not too fond of the ram picture, I dislike the colours.
Though, they're all good in their own way!
Keep shootin' bro'!

 

[Hybrid Designz]

yeah the ram pic is a new feature at our bank here. the colors are the actual colors they have on the display. weird i know but it looks nice from far off

 

[Hybrid Designz]

noone else? ;(