New Session! Part II

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  1. The Phototron

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    Continued from the last thread.

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  2. The Phototron

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    More shots (and shameless bump):
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    8. For fun!
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    7 with the backlight on her hair...

    but i love 8. her expression is great! shame about the blurry hand
     
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    Lol, the backlight sure seem to tip you off.

    Yeah, 8 was a in between shot.
     
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    Bump.

    I want to get more feedback on this second part.
     
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    3 and 4 are real nice, 5 is a great one and i like 7

    great stuff there :)
     
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    Thanks.

    The focus in #2 really pisses me off! Her expression, and hair was almost perfect!
     
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    4 & 8 are best for me
     
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    number 6 ! like it alot ..

    the others are fine as well,
    number 7 is cool with the backlight , but this makes the front a little under exposure ...

    in number 1 a prefere the bw version

    number two looks kinda weird (not the image , but the finishing )
     
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    Yeah sorry that's a lot of images to comment on. :/

    I like number 6 too, it's a much effective "portrait" than the rest, the eyes and the skin tone made it more interactive than the rest.

    Number 2 is a partial catastrophe, the focus was off, but I like the expressions so I decided to salvage it.

    Thanks for commenting!
     

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