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  1. The Phototron

    The Phototron TPF Noob!

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    I was actually planning to do some outdoor shots, but it was pouring rain. So plan changed!

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    2. (Her feet wasn't in the frame during the shot, so I have to crop heavily, doh!)
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    Don't tell me to change her expression! :D

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    6. (Not so sure about this one)
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    She's great at posing, I didn't have to do much in that area.

    Comments and critiques are welcome as usual! ;)
     
  2. Sideburns

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    lines from her pants are distracting...and looks like a dark line right above the pants as well...other than that I like em.
     
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    I like 5 the best. :thumbup:
     
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    yep, my thoughts too..




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  5. The Phototron

    The Phototron TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the comment.

    That's just the way her pants look like.
    Thanks!
    Thanks for the comment!
     
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    More good shots, Phototron. Your model has a very expressive face. I could put #3 on MY desk. I like #5 also. ron
     
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    i dont like the back lighting on number 4 because some of her hair is blown out and some of it isnt.

    nice shoot overall!
     
  8. The Phototron

    The Phototron TPF Noob!

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    Thanks!

    I agree on the hair light, I wanted to discard it but I like the pose.

    I'm looking for more people to shoot, anyone live around NYC area?! ;)
     
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    Change her expression. :)

    Just kidding...

    Yeh, having her shirt pulled up is too distracting.
     
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    you're in NYC?
     
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    The Phototron TPF Noob!

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    I wouldn't dare asking her to do that! :lol:

    Yep, you too?
     
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    I meant on her skin FROM her pants. Do you see what I mean? Like..on her stomach.
     

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