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  1. MiKaLa119

    MiKaLa119 TPF Noob!

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    Just looking for some critiques... Im a complete newbie and still trying to learn the ropes... I really dont know much YET, but am willing to learn... Im going to post a few photos hoping for some advice on how to take better shots....

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Please give us some information as to what you would like critiqued; composition, technical, etc...
     
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    I would have to say sharpen the image unless your going for the soft shot but with rusty old nail and wood presenting such good textures I would keep them in the best I could. Good DOF but I wish the nail and some of the closer wood where alot sharper. Try increasing the contrast just a little to get a dark black and some good solid whites

    I also think a tighter crop... maybe some off the top and some off the bottom would help to tighten the viewer focus on your subject try a 5:7 ratio.
     

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