Nice b&w boat shot

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  1. Mtalicarox

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    Posted this in the general gallery first.. think it would be better suited for this though..


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    Might I ask the time of day and weather when this shot was taken? Regarding those bits of orange, frankly I feel they throw things off a bit.
    As it stands, and please don't misinterpret this for cruelty, I feel there is too much visual information crammed into the frame. Perhaps (a larger version) and a bit of cropping might help reduce the extraneous/superfluous detail.
    (One man's opinion.)
     
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    It is a very busy photo with the eye moving all over it.
     
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    Ah yes, it is a busy photo... it was around 4 PM when I took it.. weather was sunny/cloudy. Yeah it got compressed a little when it got uploaded to photobucket..

    thanks for looking though
     
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    horizon line i feel its need to tilt it little to right
    red colors not that much give effects
    as they friends say up
    its busy shoot
    i prefer the wooden walkway not in center

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    the horizon looks a little crooked to me... or one of my eyes is higher than the other... ;)
     
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    Yeah.. the land behind it was slanted.. so it's either boat is straight, or road is straight.. I simply cannot transform the earth in such little time to take a shot... YET..
     
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    excuses, excuses.... :p
     
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    I'll work on being able to move land with my mind.. or until a big wave comes in and angles the boat JUSTTTT right....
     

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