Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by KAikens318, Jun 7, 2009.
Not exactly the most meaningful composition. Keep shooting.
What do you mean by "not meaningful"?
It's just kind of a boring subject. Plus the leaves framing the picture are kind of distracting. Is this part of a bigger skyline?
Foreground leaves are distracting.
The left hand side of the image also has lots of foliage and a really bright white spot. Zooming in closer to the cityscape would of cut that out.
The building right in the middle looks interesting enough but its too small.
I did a quick crop to remove the foreground leaves and left most foliage and the image is a bit blah, but might still give you an idea...
Still not a perfect crop, I don't like the bottom part of the picture, but you get the idea. Find elements that are more interesting and try and zoom in and use those as a focal point for your image. Something like the PSNH builging in the middle, the red/white tower, the clock tower thing on the far right...
Well IT could be better with a little less lighting but good so far. Keep Practicing
Not part of a bigger skyline, that is all there is to my town.
Sorry it's boring!
not bad, but i feel your pic doesn't tell a story or say anything. that would give the pic more value
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