Night shoot C&C?

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  1. KAikens318

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    Not exactly the most meaningful composition. Keep shooting.
     
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    What do you mean by "not meaningful"?
     
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    It's just kind of a boring subject. Plus the leaves framing the picture are kind of distracting. Is this part of a bigger skyline?
     
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    Foreground leaves are distracting.
    The left hand side of the image also has lots of foliage and a really bright white spot. Zooming in closer to the cityscape would of cut that out.

    The building right in the middle looks interesting enough but its too small.

    I did a quick crop to remove the foreground leaves and left most foliage and the image is a bit blah, but might still give you an idea...

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    Still not a perfect crop, I don't like the bottom part of the picture, but you get the idea. Find elements that are more interesting and try and zoom in and use those as a focal point for your image. Something like the PSNH builging in the middle, the red/white tower, the clock tower thing on the far right...
     
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    Well IT could be better with a little less lighting but good so far. Keep Practicing
     
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    Not part of a bigger skyline, that is all there is to my town. :)

    Sorry it's boring!
     
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    not bad, but i feel your pic doesn't tell a story or say anything. that would give the pic more value[​IMG]
     

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