Ok, first posted boudior. Don't be too harsh. :-)

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  1. bennielou

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    This is a highschool chum of mine. Another high school chum let us use his mansion even though you can't really see it here. (It was amazing. I love my house, but came home feeling like I lived in a crude lean to after leaving)
    Anyhoo, she wanted the works. It's harder doing boudior for a 45 year old than a 20 year old. (I can already here the "amens" from the boudior shooters out there).

    Anyhoo, I wanted to share these, and see if there is something I can improve on. (Not skin, she wants it this way).

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    I really like #2,3,4,5 and 6. You have done a really nice job of posing her in flattering ways and capturing her personality.


    In #2 I would like it even better if there was a little less shadow or a softer shadow on the right side of her face. Even so I like it a lot.

    #1 doesn't look like it belongs with the other 5. It seems awkward somehow and artificial. Sorry I can't be more specific than that. It just doesn't grab me like the others did.

    Great shots, I bet your friend was very happy with them!
     
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    Don't apolgize. That is what I wanted to know. Number one is her hubbies favorite outfit. They were highschool sweethearts and he still remembers her as a cheerleader. :)
     
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    Did you edit her legs/butt and stomach in the last one?
     
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    nice job! #2 seems very pink toned to me-
     
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    2 and 3 look really nice to me. Not a fan of her hair in any of the other pics. The last one has potential if she would turn slightly towards the camera or slightly more away, show a big flash of teeth and get the hair pulled back.
     
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    Well, I won't be too harsh because I don't know what to say since I don't get this kind of photography. If my wife gave me some shots like this I wouldn't know what to do with them. :lol:

    Now, give me a beautiful artsy B&W nude, that I understand :D
     
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    She's 45?!!! :shock:
     
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    i dunno wtf is going on with the last pic. Her body looks....... weird ....
     
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    I'm not quite sure how I feel about them, but I can say with full certainty that #4 has to go.
     
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    I like that bedroom set from Macy's.
     
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    #4 and #5 are my least favourites. The windows are filthy in #5!
    But the rest are fun. Hope she enjoys them.
     

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