Passing Afternoon.

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  1. Peach Comma

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    A birdhouse, weeds, and clouds.
     
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    Feels awkward to me; the birdhouse specifically.

    It's probably the way the lines of the grain and birdhouse are so close, but so far, that throws the pictures off for me.
     
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    I really like it actually, gives me a sense of the weather, being windy, because of the way it's slanted. I like the cuteness of the birdhouse as well.
     
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    Me too (like it that is). It's an out of time pic :thumbsup:
     
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    i'm undecided in a way. i like the shot. the exposure is great though i just feel there's something missing and can't think what!
     
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    I like the picture, but I think the composition is sort of weird. I'm sort of looking back and forth at the birdhouse and that puffy cloud to the right.
     
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    I dunno - it all dresses to the left a bit for me.
     

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