patterns and thought

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  1. nabero

    nabero TPF Noob!

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    Shot in a church this weekend...constructive criticism and critique welcome.

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    Cheers
     
  2. boogaguy

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    I really like the second one best.
    Is that you in the last one?
    As I look at them longer really like the candles as well
     
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    I like number 2, but I find my self wondering what it would be like if the isle went straight through the middle.

    Also, I like the candle shot.

    Great job!
    :thumbup:
     
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    There is something about 4, i keep wanting to stare at it but once i do something bothers me about it. Im sure this was very help full criticism and critique........ sorry lol
     
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    Thanks :sillysmi:

    That's not me in the last one...she's waiting for the mass to start.

    I was actually wondering this too...i'm going to try to work with it more since you brought it up...thanks :)

    Thanks loser...i'll try to um...make my shots less bothersome in the future :lol:
     
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    number two is the best for me!
    however, having it totally diagonal, or totally symmetric would be even more of my taste ;)
     
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    number 3 is the best for me..
    lovely
     
  8. Alex_B

    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Maybe it is just a bit too dark and not enough contrast?

    how about this quick edit?
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    up in brightness, up in contrast, down in saturation
     

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