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  1. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    Can ya'll tell me what you think of this?

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    I have been looking at it for a while and can't think of what to do.
     
  2. voodoocat

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    The converging lines really make the building lean back. You get that when shooting up at an angle. Though in this shot, you could have levelled the camera and included the stairs which would have lead the eye up to the building. Exposure wise, I think this one could use more of it. The clouds are still in zone ~7 so another 1 - 2 stops would have kept the detail while bringing out the building a bit more.
     
  3. MDowdey

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    i hate that building. its so pretty but you cant ever get a good shot of it!! good work so far though!!



    md
     
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  5. Lyanna

    Lyanna TPF Noob!

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    Level the horizon! :D And yes, it's a little underexposed. I can see you wanted to bring out the detail in the sky, but as a result the building is too dark

    Nice shot though, I like the lines.
     
  6. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    Well thanks guys. I'll have to go to this wretched building again soon and try again. MD's right, it is hard to get a good shot of.
     

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