kahulani
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my reason on not talking about framing, is once again back to the camera angle - one step at a time. Once and IF you reshoot it and frame her, cut the wall out. The wall is a double edge sword - to some people it is disgustingly distracting and to others IF IT IS BLURRED out it indicated shallow DoF. My self, I'm in both categories - since full length should be show little bit of the background; however you could crop her to 2/3rd and get rid of great part of that yaki wallbut I think this shot could be improved if you got rid of the dead space on the right side of the frame.
I agree. I would crop out the majority of that stuff on the right side of the shot so the subject is closer to the right edge of the photo.I don't do a lot of portrait work, but I think this shot could be improved if you got rid of the dead space on the right side of the frame. She's looking over towards the left side of the frame, and all that emptyness on the right side isn't doing anything for the shot. I think as far as everything else is concerned, it looks pretty good.
Nice composition, and lighting.
The only thing I'd change is the camera's angle - I don't like to shoot up into the person b/c doing so subject might get double chin. Don't like double chins.